I'm still in the process now of reducing the amount of text and changing/adding other elements, may be tomorrow before its up (As its getting late here in the UK)
Thanks =alexdesigns for the critique ( which has disappeared now )
Definitely better. You may still want to do something about the content text being too much. About the critique..it's weird because I wasn't able to see it here since I posted it
Thanks mate. I'm going to have another go at it later today and see if i can improve on it more. I was able to read the critique from my message centre but when I came to the deviation it wasn't there and I cant find it.
very nice colors and design